Kristi
Kristi
Sarah! Wake up!
Kristi
Kristi
Do you hear that?
Kristi jumps out of her bed and walks across the hotel room.
She reaches Sarah’s bed…
And jostles her sister awake.
Sarah groans and rolls over.
Sarah
Sarah
Ugh. What do you want?
Kristi
Kristi
Listen…
Sarah
Sarah
Geez Kristi, it’s 3 in the morning.
Sarah
Sarah
Go back to sleep.
Kristi
Kristi
Get up! Come on.
Sarah
Sarah
What the — what are you doing?
Kristi
Kristi
Shhhhh! Listen.
Sarah
Sarah
For what?
Kristi points to the ceiling.
Kristi
Kristi
Up there. You don’t hear that?
Sarah
Sarah
Now I do…
Sarah
Sarah
But it just sounds like someone pacing back and forth.
Kristi
Kristi
It doesn’t make any sense.
Sarah
Sarah
Why not?
Sarah
Sarah
Haven’t you ever had loud upstairs neighbors?
Kristi
Kristi
There aren’t any bedrooms above us!
Kristi
Kristi
It’s just an abandoned ballroom.
Sarah
Sarah
How do you know that?
Kristi
Kristi
I toured the hotel when we first got here.
Kristi
Kristi
Explored each floor.
Kristi
Kristi
We’re the last floor that holds rooms.
Kristi
Kristi
Above us is the ballroom. It's huge! But abandoned.
Kristi
Kristi
Or at least it looked that way.
Sarah
Sarah
Is that what you were doing when you disappeared for like, an hour?
Kristi
Kristi
Yep…
Sarah
Sarah
Why? It’s just a hotel in the middle of nowhere Montana.
Kristi
Kristi
It’s been in use since the 1800s!
Kristi
Kristi
To me, that’s pretty cool. I had to look around.
Sarah
Sarah
I could’ve used your help unpacking…
Kristi
Kristi
Whatever. That sound has been going on all night.
Kristi
Kristi
I can’t sleep!
Sarah
Sarah
It’s probably just the staff or whoever.
Kristi
Kristi
At this time of night? And for this long?
Sarah
Sarah
Beats me.
Sarah lies back down and pulls the covers up to her chin.
Kristi
Kristi
Plus, I already told you it's abandoned.
Kristi
Kristi
They aren't storing anything in there.
Sarah
Sarah
If it concerns you so much, go check it out.
Kristi
Kristi
Maybe I will…
Sarah
Sarah
If it’ll shut you up, please, do it.
Kristi
Kristi
What if it’s a ghost or something…
Sarah
Sarah
You can’t be serious.
Kristi
Kristi
I don’t know…old places like this…
Kristi
Kristi
Usually they’re haunted.
Sarah
Sarah
Like I said, go find out for yourself, then.
Kristi
Kristi
Leave me in peace.
Kristi
Kristi
Fine. I’m going.
Sarah
Sarah
Hallelujah. Finally, some quiet.
Kristi
Kristi
Hopefully I don’t get possessed or killed!
Sarah
Sarah
One can only hope.
Kristi sneaks out of their room and tiptoes down the hallway.
The wooden floors creak beneath her weight and are cold on her feet.
She takes the elevator up to the top floor and comes to the door of the ballroom.
She presses her ear up against the door and hears footsteps inside.
Someone is definitely in there.
She takes one last deep breath and slowly pushes the door open.
She can’t see anything.
The ballroom is pitch black.
She curses under her breath and fishes her phone out of her pocket.
Suddenly, from the ballroom, there’s the sound of someone running toward her.
She fumbles with her phone and finds the flashlight setting.
She shines the light in front of her.
There’s nothing there.
Just an empty room.
She slams the door shut and runs back to her room.
Sarah groans and rolls over as Kristi frantically locks their door.
The pacing upstairs continues.
And Kristi, wide-eyed, listens the entire night, unable to sleep.
The next morning
Sarah
Sarah
I see you survived.
Kristi is sitting up in bed, terrified.
Sarah
Sarah
You okay? No offense, but you look like crap.
Kristi
Kristi
I didn’t get any sleep last night.
Sarah
Sarah
Don’t tell me it was because of that stupid noise upstairs.
Kristi
Kristi
Someone was up there last night, I swear to you.
Sarah
Sarah
Did you actually go and check?
Kristi
Kristi
YES! But when I looked, there was NO ONE!
Sarah
Sarah
Creepy…
Kristi
Kristi
We can’t stay here another night.
Sarah
Sarah
I think you’re overreacting.
Kristi
Kristi
I CAN’T DO IT!
Sarah
Sarah
Calm down. Let’s go talk to one of the staff.
Sarah
Sarah
I’m sure they know who or what it was.
Sarah
Sarah
Maybe we can switch rooms.
Sarah forces Kristi to go with her to the front desk.
Mark, one of the staff, is there.
Mark
Mark
How can I help you two ladies?
Sarah
Sarah
I’m wondering if you can’t help us solve a mystery.
Mark
Mark
I’ll do my best.
Sarah
Sarah
My sister heard a noise above us last night.
Sarah
Sarah
I heard it too. Like someone was walking around or something.
Kristi
Kristi
It went on all night! Then when I went to investigate—
Sarah
Sarah
What Kristi is trying to say is that she had a hard time sleeping because of it.
Mark
Mark
Oh no! I’m sorry to hear that. What room are you currently staying in?
Sarah
Sarah
Room 421.
Mark
Mark
Let me see here.
Mark types something on his computer.
Mark
Mark
Hm…that’s odd.
Kristi
Kristi
What?! Did you find something?!
Mark
Mark
It slipped my mind, but Room 421 is the last floor with bedrooms.
Mark
Mark
It doesn’t make sense that you heard footsteps above you.
Kristi
Kristi
Exactly!
Sarah
Sarah
Well you see, my snoopy sister took herself on a tour of your facilities yesterday…
Sarah
Sarah
She found the ballroom you have on the fifth floor.
Mark’s expression darkens.
Mark
Mark
You did?
Kristi
Kristi
I’m sorry. I just wanted to take a look around.
Mark
Mark
No need to apologize, I’m just confused…
Kristi
Kristi
Confused?
Mark
Mark
Well, I was the only one working last night.
Mark
Mark
And I can assure you I stayed behind this desk the entire time.
Kristi
Kristi
You sure the cleaning person or someone wasn’t up there and you just forgot?
Mark
Mark
Unless it was another guest, I can guarantee you no staff went up there.
Mark
Mark
The staff tends to avoid that area.
Kristi
Kristi
Why?
Mark
Mark
For some reason they find it…unpleasant.
Kristi
Kristi
How so?
Mark points to a large black and white photo hanging behind him.
3 men stare stoically ahead.
Mark
Mark
That man in the middle. That’s Daryl Korver.
Mark
Mark
He and the other 2 people beside him built this hotel.
Mark
Mark
Daryl’s the only one that actually lived here, though.
Mark
Mark
Folklore has it that something about this place drove him mad.
Mark
Mark
Some think it was an evil spirit, that took possession of him.
Mark
Mark
Whatever it was, he used to take 1 guest each month…
Mark
Mark
Lead them to the ballroom…and then.
Mark
Mark
Murder them.
Mark
Mark
When the other 2 founders realized this, they showed up with the authorities to arrest him.
Mark
Mark
But Daryl set the place on fire.
Mark
Mark
With himself inside.
Kristi and Sarah sit in stunned silence.
Mark
Mark
It’s a truly unpleasant stain on our establishment.
Mark
Mark
But ever since then, the hotel has been under the Landry’s ownership.
Mark
Mark
And it’s just urban legend, after all.
Mark
Mark
I assure you all is well.
Kristi
Kristi
Sarah, we can’t stay here.
Sarah
Sarah
You heard him, it’s just a story.
Mark
Mark
Oh my…I probably shouldn’t have shared that.
Mark
Mark
I promise you everything is okay!
Kristi
Kristi
Let’s leave. We can stay somewhere else.
Mark
Mark
No. No. No. You know what? I’ll offer you a free night if you stay.
Mark
Mark
I’m sorry for the inconvenience.
Sarah
Sarah
Holy cow! YES! We’ll take it.
Kristi
Kristi
Listen to me. We need to go—
Mark
Mark
I’ve got you down for a free night.
Mark
Mark
Please let me know if there’s anything else you need.
Kristi
Kristi
Sarah—
Sarah
Sarah
Enough! We’re staying.
That night
Sarah snores as Kristi lies awake, staring at the ceiling.
Sure enough, footsteps can be heard above her…
It actually sounds like heels clanking on a hardwood floor.
Kristi, sweating, white-knuckles the top of the comforter.
After several hours…
She decides to find out once and for all what’s REALLY happening.
She makes her way to the ballroom’s entrance, flicks on her flashlight, and walks in.
Kristi
Kristi
Hello?!
She doesn’t hear anything.
The footsteps have stopped.
Kristi
Kristi
I know someone is in here.
Kristi
Kristi
SHOW YOURSELF!
Her light shines across the empty room.
No one is with her.
Kristi
Kristi
HELLO?!
Silence.
Maybe she was imagining it all.
As she turns to leave, the footsteps return…
Running toward her like the first night.
Something knocks her off her feet.
Knocking the wind out of her.
Kristi
Kristi
Who’s there?!
Again, silence.
She shines her phone in front of her, nothing.
She looks behind her.
And screams.
But she quickly clamps her hand over her mouth—
Realizing that the figure…
Is just Mark.
Kristi
Kristi
Oh thank God!
Kristi
Kristi
You scared me.
Mark
Mark
Apologies. I just came to check on that noise you mentioned.
Kristi
Kristi
You heard it too?
Mark
Mark
I’m afraid not, I just wanted to be thorough.
Kristi
Kristi
Oh. Well, I guess I’ll head back to my room then…
Kristi
Kristi
Since you have this under control.
Kristi begins to walk toward the door.
But Mark grabs her arm, stopping her.
Mark
Mark
No need to leave.
Kristi looks at Mark, then down to his hand, clamped on her wrist.
Kristi
Kristi
What?
Mark
Mark
Well since you felt the need to poke around.
Mark
Mark
Stick your nose where it doesn’t belong.
Mark
Mark
I thought I’d let you see this thing through.
Kristi
Kristi
What are you talking about?
A cold breeze blows against Kristi’s skin.
She shivers.
Kristi
Kristi
What’s going on here?
Mark
Mark
That urban legend I told you?
Mark
Mark
It’s real.
Mark
Mark
There is a spirit that lives here…
Mark
Mark
She takes possession of the weak.
Mark
Mark
But I’m strong.
Mark
Mark
Not like my ancestors.
Mark
Mark
And if she can’t have me.
Mark
Mark
Then she needs to feed.
Mark releases Kristi’s wrist, pushing her back into the ballroom.
He spins around and runs out of the room, slamming the door behind him.
Kristi finds her footing and chases after him.
She tries to open the door…
But it’s locked.
She feels another breeze.
And the hair on the back of her neck stands up.
She turns…slowly…
And standing in the center of the ballroom…
Is a woman in a white dress.
She’s wearing heels and staring blankly at Kristi.
The woman’s eyes are dark.
She smiles.
Kristi screams.
Something throws Kristi to the ground again.
There’s a bright flash in the far corner of the room.
And smoke starts to fill the ballroom.
Kristi can’t stop coughing.
Through the smoke, she can see flames climbing up the walls, spreading across the floor…
She frantically tries the door handle again—
Slamming her entire body against the door.
Suddenly, the door opens from the other side.
Sarah stands there.
Sarah
Sarah
Hey. I thought I’d find you here—
Kristi
Kristi
RUN!
Sarah looks past Kristi…
And doesn’t need to be told twice.
Sarah grabs Kristi’s hand.
And they run.
Newspaper Headline
Newspaper Headline
Montana hotel evacuated after fire.
Article
Article
Last night a Montana hotel caught fire.
Article
Article
Most of its upper ballroom burned before fire personnel could put it out.
Article
Article
The cause is unclear, but luckily no one was hurt.
Article
Article
Kristi and Sarah Southerland, sisters, were caught upstairs but managed to escape.
Article
Article
Unfortunately, no staff were available for comment…
Article
Article
As the only employee scheduled to work that evening was Mark Korver…
Article
Article
And his whereabouts remain unknown, despite efforts by local authorities to track him down.
Article
Article
This fire marks the 100th anniversary of the Great Fire, which destroyed most of the original hotel. An ironic turn of events.
Kristi
Kristi