Invitation to Danger
by Joe Tripician
Don’t be late for dinner tonight.
ok
I will make the announcement after we eat.
We agreed that we’d do it together.
No. I’m their mother.
And I’m their father. I have a right and I get a say.
Don’t escalate this.
You don’t get to decide unilaterally.
I just want it to be gentle on the kids. You have a tendency to be abrupt and rough.
I would say “FU” but you’d use it as an example of my overwhelming roughness.
I’ll ignore that. If you will please -- for the kids -- keep your temper down.
I don’t see why we can’t wait until school ends.
We’ve been through this. Vacation has to be scheduled in advance, if we’re sharing custody.
What if we don’t mention it?
We discussed this before and you agreed.
Just hear me out. What if we try to make it work?
I’m not having this talk again.
I’m thinking of the kids here, too. I had a good talk with Nancy today.
You know I’ve been reading that book on how to communicate with a teen daughter. I think we finally connected.
And Paul finally forgave me for my prank.
You faked a heart attack. That’s no joke.
C’mon it was funny. The video got lots of hits.
Shared custody, and equal division of assets. That. Is. All.
Rita??
Dad?
Hi honey.
Help!
What’s wrong?!
Nancy? Nancy?!!!
Rita, something’s wrong with Nancy.
What is it?!
Don’t know. She just sent me a text - “Help”
Where is she?
I dropped her off at the mall less than an hour ago.
Now she doesn’t answer.
Should I call the police?
Dad?
HONEY WHERE ARE U?
in a car trunk
What happened!!
Tony??
Someone grabbed me, stuck me in here. The GPS shows I’m on Franklin St. headed south to the Oakfield Camp Grounds.
Don’t worry. We’re calling the cops.
Please don’t!! He said he’d kill me if he sees police
Tony!!
Who are they?
Rita, she’s texting me now. Wait…
He said he was Paul’s friend & invited me to a party - car stopped can’t talk now
Tony, what happened?!!!
Rita - she’s at the oakfield camp I’m going to get her.
Tony, I’m calling the police.
DO NOT!!! THEY WILL HURT HER!!! NO POLICE!!! CONFIRM NOW!
OK. Please get her back safe. But if I don’t hear from you in 30 minutes, I’m calling the cops.
20 minutes later
Tony?
Tony!!!
Tony, I called the police. They’re going to the camp.
Please call.
Tony…
Tony?
Rita, I hear the sirens
TONY IS SHE SAFE?!!!
Yes…
And you?
I’m sorry
Why? What happened?!
I parked quietly. Crept slowly toward the edge of the camp. Heard a man’s laughter.
It was all a prank. They set up a huge tent. For our anniversary celebration.
But I didn’t know that until it was too late
WHAT?!
All I saw was a man in a hoodie holding Nancy. I yelled.
When he turned quickly to me she fell and I saw a weapon in his hand so I shot.
It wasn’t a weapon - it was a beer can.
Nancy is crying, in shock.
WHAT HAPPENED?!!
Nancy is fine, but Paul…
WHAT?!!!!
The sirens are getting closer. It’s time.
I’m sorry, Rita Goodbye…
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