My Confidant - Episode 1
by Elle Jordan
Topher, was that you?
Do you hear that clunking noise?
It sounds like someone stomping around.
OMG, I’m too afraid to look out my bedroom door…
Is there someone in our apartment?
8 minutes later
Topher?
Answer me! You always respond to my texts…
12 minutes later
Okay, now I’m COMPLETELY creeped out.
Lucy texts her boyfriend, Brendan.
He lives halfway across the country in New York,
But Lucy hopes he can make her feel better.
Brendan, it’s Lucy.
I know--I think I’d recognize my gf’s number.
This isn’t funny--I think there’s someone in my apartment.
Are you sure it’s not your upstairs neighbors?
Yeah. It sounds closer than that
It’s a clunking noise, like someone in heavy boots is walking around in my living room
And Topher isn’t answering my texts.
That’s because Topher’s a dick.
I don’t know why you live with that tool in Detroit when you could live in NYC with me.
Let’s not get into that now--there’s someone in my FREAKING apartment!
There’s all this banging
OMG, now someone’s knocking on my bedroom door!
Is it Topher? 😉
No!
I called out his name but he didn’t answer.
This really isn’t funny.
Why wouldn’t he answer?
I don’t know
Maybe he didn’t hear you respond and didn’t want to wake you
It’s 3 AM, Luce.
You’re not being very supportive right now.
Okay. Sorry.
You could lock your bedroom door to be extra safe.
I’m so scared I don’t even want to get out of bed
What if the intruder has a gun and shoots me through the door?
What if there’s no intruder?
Again, not supportive.😝
2 minutes later
?
I locked the door…do you think it’s secure?
Luce, no one is going to pick your lock. You’re imagining things.
OMG! I think they heard me--now they’re BANGING on the door
It’s a man. Oh God…
He’s saying that if I don’t open it, I’ll never see my friend again.
Holy shit, Luce!
There IS someone in your apartment.
This is bad--you have to get out of there
Can you climb down your fire escape?
But what about Topher?
Luce, there’s an intruder in your apartment.
Topher might not even be alive.
For once in your life put yourself first
I can’t leave him.
He’s my best friend.
I’m calling the police
What’s your address again?
You don’t have it memorized?
Luce, I can’t really think straight right now…
My girlfriend could be attacked any minute.
Fine.
Ugh, Goddamn Detroit.
I hate that you live there.
Shit, wasn’t that Congressman just shot out there?
Yeah…
Goddammit! I wish you were still in New York.
I’d be at your apartment right now if you were.
I wish you’d never taken that art residency out there
It’s always been felt so impossible–you being so far away
But never worse than now.
I know…
But Brendan, I had to follow my dreams
Feels more like a nightmare tonight.
I know. Stay on the phone with me?
Of course.
It’s on silent though, right?
Yeah, and my bedroom light is off.
Good.
So… what are you wearing?
Brendan!
What? Can’t blame a guy for trying
I haven’t seen you in 3 weeks.
You know you’re always welcome to visit
You know I can’t always visit, Luce
I have a job
You just paint over there with Topher
This whole art residency thing was his idea in the first place.
Brendan!
You don’t think that I hate it here too right now?
I’m scared to death and I’m trapped in my apartment!
I’m scared to death too!
I’m not done talking yet.
Brendan, when I’m in Detroit, painting…
I’m alive.
I’m never going to let you take that away from me.
It’s not worth it.
That’s not your decision.
Maybe it should be.
Brendan!
I know you didn’t mean that.
I know. I’m sorry.
Shit! The banging’s getting louder…
Do you think he can break down the door?
God, don’t scare me like that.
Brendan?
The knocking stopped.
I don’t like this…
I don’t like it either, Luce
OMG, he’s rattling the doorknob!
What if he knows how to pick the locks?
Luce, you’ve got to listen to me
I know you don’t want to leave Topher, but you’re got to get out of that building
That guy figured out a way to get into your apartment…
He’ll get into your bedroom.
You gotta do it Luce.
For me.
1 minute later
Okay.
Okay?
Okay. Yes. I’ll go.
How?
Do you have those iron safety bars on your window?
No.
Good.
Go out your window and down the fire escape.
I can’t! It’s outside Topher’s window, not mine.
Is Topher’s window close to yours?
I could probably reach it
But I might have to jump.
Okay. You’re on the second floor, right?
With only one story below you?
Yeah
I think you should do it.
You CAN do it.
See? Isn’t that supportive? 😉
Yeah. It actually helps a lot.
Okay—go!
Before they pick the lock.
And don’t text me again until you’re a few blocks away.
5 minutes later
Luce?
Omg, Luce, we forgot to say I love you
Please say something
Holy shit, I’m freaking out
Brendan!
Lucy, you’re alive!
Thank God
I thought I’d lost you.
So you still love me, huh?
I was just being supportive 😉
Where are you now?
You were arrested?!
No, I’m sitting in the back of the police car for protection. The police are in my apartment.
WHAT?! Why?
It’s okay--I must’ve left my apartment at the perfect time
Right after I turned the corner, the cops came down the street.
I flagged them down and I looked crazy, I mean, absolutely crazy
I’m still in my pj’s and I’m barefoot.
I bet you look beautiful
You’re alive so you’d look perfect to me no matter what you were wearing.
Haha, you have to say stuff like that because you’re my boyfriend.
But I love you anyway 😘
It’s strange sitting back here with sirens going.
There’s an ambulance here too.
For what?
I don’t know. What if…
I don’t like the idea of you being in a cop car like that.
I know. There’s a cop in the front but he’s quiet.
He won’t answer my questions.
And it’s weird, because another cop went into my apartment building
A couple other cops went up after her…
Like, after she’d been up there awhile.
So how are you feeling?
I’m okay. My heartbeat’s slowing down.
Holy shit!
What?
Shit, shit!
Luce, stop
I’m pretty damn terrified, so please--
Just tell me you’re okay.
I’m sorry
I’m safe.
I’m still in the police car, but the cops came down from my apartment
With this…
What?!
I think Topher is dead.
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