The Intruder - Episode 10
by Jonathan Rosen
We beat Mankill!!
You did?? The same way?
Kind of. While I distracted him, Norville blasted him.
Mankill looked shocked that Norville was there.
There’s probably some code in the characters that expects Norville to be dead.
You just threw everything in the game into a tailspin.
From now on nothing is guaranteed.
Everything that I knew about the game doesn’t matter anymore. It’s all changed.
Where are you now?
We’re in the castle staircase. Right before the top floor where we see the Leader.
The Leader should be there at any moment.
So you don’t know how to defeat the Leader?
No. But there’s got to be a way. Every video game has a way for the main character to win.
Even if it’s some tiny thing.
All you have to do is find it.
Did you take Mankill’s amulet this time?
Yes. I remembered!
Good. So what are you going to do now?
I’m following Norville. We’re going up to the top.
I know what you’re going to say. Be careful.
Yes, be careful. I hope the same way works to defeat him now.
I told Norville that the Leader is only expecting to see me. I’m going to take the front.
What? NO! As long as Norville is there, let him do it!
He’s much more experienced than you.
No, Dad. This is my fight.
And the Leader won’t be expecting Norville. We’ll have the element of surprise.
But the game probably won’t even let him win alone. It has to be me at the end.
Everything in the game has changed! Who knows what it will do? Let him try!
If you were here, you’d take the lead.
No, I wouldn’t! I’d let him go!
You’re lying.
I’m going!
I hate that I’m not there. Either to help you, or to ground you for not listening!!
Don’t worry. I’ll be back
I HATE THIS!
five minutes later
Eddie? What’s going on?
I’m dying over here!
Eddie?
Okay, Eddie, I’m starting to worry. Are you there?
thirty minutes later
Eddie! Please answer!
They’re fighting!
What? Who is?
The Leader and Norville. I used Mankill’s amulet as a shield.
I started to get close, but then Norville came out and blasted the Leader.
Knocked him off his feet.
That’s great!!
No, it’s not!
Then the Leader turned his attention from me and is fighting Norville.
I think the Leader is winning!
So what are you doing?
I froze. I don’t know WHAT to do!
Where are you now??
I’m still at the top of the castle. When the Leader went to Norville, I ran and hid. I’m not invisible or anything.
No, you wouldn’t be. All the power is gone and you were supposed to beat the Leader once and for all by yourself, using all the strength from your journey.
Oh great. I can’t do it. The Leader is powerful and Norville is struggling.
The Leader is talking to him. Telling Norville that he’s going to kill him.
And then catch me. And then get you back.
Me? He mentioned me?
Yes. He seems to know all about you.
Eddie, you have to attack now!
Dad, I can’t. I’m scared.
I know you are, but while all his attention is on Norville, this is your chance.
He’s probably weakened from Norville’s blast. THIS is your opportunity!!
What do I do?
Do you still have Mankill’s amulet?
Yes.
Okay, I want you run straight at him. Hold the amulet up as a shield.
Attack! I mean it! ATTACK!
Are you sure?
Yes! Between you and Norville, the Leader can’t focus on both. The two of you can defeat him together.
Use the amulet and charge him. Get the axe ready for when you’re close.
Eddie, the staff he’s using for magic only works if it’s in one piece. You know what to do with the axe.
Take a deep breath and do this!
Okay, I’m going now.
Yes, I know.
BE CAREFUL!
I’ll be waiting.
one hour later
IT’S OVER!!
What is? What happened??
We beat the Leader!! Norville and I beat the Leader!!
OMG Eddie!! Tell me everything!
Just like you said! Norville and I worked together.
Norville blasted him while I got close.
I chopped the staff in half.
The second I did that, Norville’s staff took all the Leader’s powers.
After that, it was easy to beat him.
Well, not easy, but easier.
That’s amazing! Eddie, I’m soooo proud of you!!
So what happens now?
Norville is taking over the game!!
What???
Are you serious??
YES!!
He’s taking over and he’s going to be in charge.
Wait!
Norville is going to be in charge of all the orcs and trolls?
Norville is turning bad?
NO! That’s not what I meant.
He’s going to be in charge, but he’s changing the game.
I don’t understand. What do you mean?
If he’s working with trolls and orcs and mercenaries, then it’s going to change him.
No. He’s changing the game. It’s going to be a fun game for kids from now on.
The player is going to have to learn about getting along and trading and building with diverse species.
It’ll be for younger kids. Everyone will work together.
I don’t believe it. Wow! And the old Leader?
Well, he’s going to spend some time in the dungeon. LOL.
And then Norville will decide if he’s going be a part of the game or not. It all depends on the Leader’s attitude. 😊
That’s amazing.
There’s more. Norville is shutting down the gateway to you.
What do you mean?
He’s changing everything about the game, so there’s no memory of you ever playing it.
He doesn’t want anyone to ever bother you. Us. Ever again.
Eddie, I can’t even begin to tell you how proud I am. You did amazing. I knew you could.
Thanks, Dad.
So, what happens now?
Norville just hugged me and gave me the Leader’s amulet.
He did? Does that mean what I think it means?
Yeah. It means, I’m coming home.
That’s the best news I’ve ever heard.
Eddie?
Yeah, Dad?
Can you thank Norville for me?
You can thank him yourself.
What do you mean?
Before he takes full leadership of the game, Norville said he wants to see his old friend.
What? Are you saying what I think you are?
Yeah, Dad. Expect two for dinner.
I’m stunned, I can’t believe it.
Thank you, Eddie.
And he says to remind you that wizards have huge appetites.
LOL! That they do.
We’ll see you soon, Dad.
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